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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Currents sometimes flow fast other times flowing slow rushing along in endless stream swirling of moments above and below swimming fiercely against the tide or floating in calm drift weathering life. Currents. I've seen the paintings in the air brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Dreamy and Moving... well written. MoonShadow . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how profound!! what a summery of life in a very beautiful poem. beautiful enjoyed. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Well said. Life's currents. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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dwgpoet Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122FL, USA |
Yes, currents are strong, surprising, oblong. Their timing is wrong. when catch you, you drown. so beware my song, "Lesson Juan" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
boy this was beautiful...yanno this beautiful weather we are having here is certainly enough to inspire such lovely poems, isn't it. We are very lucky to have such a stunning spring. Hope your enjoying it and thank you for writing this beauty. Hugs Me |
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