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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2007-05-14 02:11 PM



Currents
sometimes flow fast
other times flowing slow
rushing along in endless stream
swirling of moments above and below
swimming fiercely against the tide
or floating in calm drift
weathering life.
Currents.


I've seen the paintings in the air
brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar

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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
1 posted 2007-05-14 02:19 PM



    Dreamy and Moving... well written.

             MoonShadow
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Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-14 02:40 PM


how profound!! what a summery of life in a very beautiful poem.

beautiful

enjoyed.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2007-05-14 06:14 PM


Well said.
Life's currents.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

dwgpoet
Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122
FL, USA
4 posted 2007-05-24 02:10 AM



Yes, currents are strong,
surprising, oblong.
Their timing is wrong.
when catch you, you drown.
so beware my song,
"Lesson Juan"

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2007-05-24 02:28 PM


boy this was beautiful...yanno this beautiful weather we are having here is certainly enough to inspire such lovely poems, isn't it.  We are very lucky to have such a stunning spring.  

Hope your enjoying it and thank you for writing this beauty.

Hugs
Me

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