Open Poetry #40 |
A Toast to Absent Friends |
Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
A Toast to Absent Friends I seem to be raising a glass More frequently these days To absent friends and loved ones As I remember our yesterdays One by one they silently Stole away to their destiny Gathering together, I’m sure As they patiently wait for me There are several vacant chairs In the places where we’d meet Like the empty places in my heart Still mourning with each beat Each one left a legacy One different from the rest Some left fame and fortune Others were not so blest But the love we had for each other Is what I remember best And those of us who remain Fighting back the tears that stem Place an empty glass at the table And turn it down for them Rest in peace my comrades Until we meet again |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most beautiful toast to those friends gone before. I'll raise my glass to this one Bea. *Clink* In the midst of winter, |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Ahh Beatrice such a nice poem to your friends. I am certainly learning about losing people dear to me the older I get. Did a nice job on your rhyming. Blest is a nice transitive verb. A simple word that shows your skiils. Loved the poem im sure your friends are smiling down from heaven on this write ~Bill |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lots of absent friends here these days...I miss them all but the new ones are grand too |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Bea Being a comparative youngster I can only imagine the number of friends you have had the pleasure of knowing. I certainly have a lot who have taken their next journey before mine. "Each one left a legacy One different from the rest" All individuals, all leaving differing memories and parts of themselves with me, all very close but absent in the physical sense. "Like the empty places in my heart Still mourning with each beat " Your poetry , once again, brings these friends closer....... Ivor The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
when life makes us experience this part, it is not easy dear lady and I always try to remember, how fortunate I was to have known them and learned from them.... Bravo for a very well written tribute. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I sure did idenify with this one unfortunately. I suppose we will all agree with the words in this poem soon or later. Nice tribute to those gone. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Grandma Bea... this is a beautiful tribute to your friends who may be passed but not forgotten... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very well written. Here is a toast I learned when young: "It is a simple truth; all things and people one day meet their own and separate ends; so in this sad dark hour, stand with me to greet the reaper, and raise a glass to absent friends." |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks everyone...this is one of my favorites too.! Bea |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
What a lovely tribute to your friends and family. How true each friend leaves a special something for us to treasure kathy aka kitkat Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
thanks for sharing such amazing work |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Kitkat...Friends are the most precious gems in life's jewelbox. Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks nameless...welcome to Pip...you're going to love it here. Bea |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Place an empty glass at the table And turn it down for them" wonderful tribute Bea my glass is held high... |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Lady...A Votre Sante` Bea |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know just how you feel. I was thinking of one just last night, who has been gone since 2003. I miss her so much. |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
As long as your mind can see her...she's still here with you! Bea |
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