love between a German MD and a American Phd

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Open Poetry #40

love between a German MD and a American Phd

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-05-09 02:40 PM

You see, my friend

Crossing the table
In Club Med
He stared at me
Without smile
Every day of two weeks

I smiled back
He waved.
Without smile.
Every day of two weeks.

I walked up to him
He said ‘Hi”
Without smile
I sat myself on his left side
Every day of two weeks

I named myself
He smiled
He asked for a date
La Jolla beach at 6

Ardent
Passionate
Affectionate
Burning

You see
How much the love?!
Don’t cry

I lost my life
Cau’s he went back
To his ex-girl friend
His babies were inside

I will go home,
Go back to Deutschland
To my mother,
To have a good cry

Wipe your tears, my friend.
He’ll meet me in Munich
In this spring
After his wedding.

(Each time I tell the story
My heart is aching.)

This is a true heart-broken story of my old friend. I cried for her. I sighed for her. I am still worrying about her but I lost contact with her long time ago.

A story between a German doctor and an American top scientist. Very romantic and very sad.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-05-09 06:18 PM

this 'write' was most certainly 'real', emotive, and different!

Applause!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-05-09 06:55 PM

Enjoyed...James

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2007-05-10 12:02 PM

That is a sad story...interesting one though. Enjoyed the read.....jo

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-05-10 11:24 AM

"(Each time I tell the story
My heart is aching.)"

~ and that is painfully obvious by your emotive writing.

"Very romantic and very sad."

~ Indeed, it is.

deval
Junior Member

since 2007-05-06

Posts 16

5 posted 2007-05-10 12:41 PM

It's really EYE WETTING...
A heart touching description with very sad emotion

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