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passing shadows
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0 posted 2007-05-09 09:47 AM



I collapsed somewhere before the dawn
holding the whispers that I heard
when I thought of you with lust,
the moan in the silence slurred

and maybe you didn't feel it
sliding, swirling, falling through,
but if you could have, someway somehow,
you'd have known it was for you.

You collapsed and I felt it,
causing whispers in my soul,
like a thief in the night,
before the dawn,
it was my heart you stole.


© Copyright 2007 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-05-09 10:18 AM


isn't it always...hehehe, until we become...and then watch out, they fear us...or the confidence, and somehow we know, for certain, that ol cliche', if we'd only known then, what we know now....we'd have never looked twice, yanno?

this life, truly amazing...isn't it....

marvelous poem, just look at the thoughts you inspired....

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-05-09 10:35 AM


wow, passing, a love poem. It is beautiful, and very emotional.

enjoyed

have a happy day!

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2007-05-09 01:38 PM


interesting 'write'!

Applause!

Rick
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4 posted 2007-05-09 02:55 PM


Dear Dixie, this poem is wonderful. Your soul mate is out there my friend and awaiting your inner call, it will happen and you again will smile and laugh with life.
Have a wonderful day and goodluck.

Rick

thacuteone_09
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5 posted 2007-05-09 04:56 PM


I really like this poem!! I hope that my poems get as good as this and the others posted on the site!!


The Lady
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6 posted 2007-05-10 12:47 PM



oh those soul whispers Dixie

love this...

aziza
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7 posted 2007-05-10 02:56 AM


the moan in the silence slurred

And you left me wrapped in the strands of that silence

Alison

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