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Before The Dawn
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Before The Dawn |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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I collapsed somewhere before the dawn holding the whispers that I heard when I thought of you with lust, the moan in the silence slurred and maybe you didn't feel it sliding, swirling, falling through, but if you could have, someway somehow, you'd have known it was for you. You collapsed and I felt it, causing whispers in my soul, like a thief in the night, before the dawn, it was my heart you stole. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
isn't it always...hehehe, until we become...and then watch out, they fear us...or the confidence, and somehow we know, for certain, that ol cliche', if we'd only known then, what we know now....we'd have never looked twice, yanno? this life, truly amazing...isn't it.... marvelous poem, just look at the thoughts you inspired.... |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow, passing, a love poem. It is beautiful, and very emotional. enjoyed have a happy day! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write'! Applause! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, this poem is wonderful. Your soul mate is out there my friend and awaiting your inner call, it will happen and you again will smile and laugh with life. Have a wonderful day and goodluck. Rick |
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thacuteone_09 New Member
since 2007-05-09
Posts 7 |
I really like this poem!! I hope that my poems get as good as this and the others posted on the site!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh those soul whispers Dixie love this... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
the moan in the silence slurred And you left me wrapped in the strands of that silence Alison |
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