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tatalinia
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0 posted 2007-05-07 01:13 PM



Sitting in my little chair eyes closed
listening to the guitar in the distance
sending me into another world high as a kite
and I see you there watching me

I begin dancing for you
Wearing a white dress, see through from the rain
I glide through the night for you
hands in the air I float into the clouds

I slide and move for you
A snake with legs lost in the music
Hair matted to my head I sing for you
"Little motel"

Don't care that I no longer matter
That what I say isn't adored no longer
Right here, right now, is good enough for me
This truely is heaven on earth

When I open my eyes
Its you there playing the guitar
And you sing to me
"Little motel."

"Right here. Right now , is good enough for me
This truely is heaven on earth"


Inspired by band: Modest Mouse, song: "little motel"

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

© Copyright 2007 Althia Kinsey - All Rights Reserved
The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
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1 posted 2007-05-07 01:56 PM


nice poem inspired by a good song
Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
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Where no tyranny is tolerable
2 posted 2007-05-07 04:59 PM


Does not the magic Well of Life spring from the spirit?
Doesn't the enchanted garden of the gods
grow in the heart?

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
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Where no tyranny is tolerable
3 posted 2007-05-07 05:03 PM


Does not the magic Well of Life spring from the spirit?
Doesn't the enchanted garden of the gods
grow in the heart?

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-05-07 06:14 PM


it is a good peom to read. If one can be happy  by oneself then one can be happy anywhere.

enjoyed.

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