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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-05-07 12:23 PM


.


Even then
Upon opening
The stale— musty
Dusty smell— of being old

Childhood
Beside a small
Attic window
With its dead flies
Spider webs
Yet in the only light

The curled
Yellowed photographs
Of those who never came
Or would ever be seen alive

They stood
Still
Their hair
In the fashions of the time

With no
Or nervous smiles
Unconsciously
Suspicious perhaps
Uncertain of what it was

The camera
With that single
Indifferent eye
Would take and have

Once the shutter snapped


.


© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-05-07 12:52 PM


John~
Time marches on until the magic of the camera commands HALT
... then time stands still so that the generations to come will know us as we were~

I happen to have a passion for old photographs ... often buying them from antique shops ... I greatly enjoy the stately elegant manner of the older poses~

Thanks for this ..~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-05-07 01:53 PM


simply superb!

[I believe this is the 'write'
of which I am most fond...
  from all of that which I have read by
   this very interesting and talented
    author!]

MUCH (long sustained) applause!!

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3 posted 2007-05-07 02:21 PM


Again, you've captured the essence of photography, a self-portrait of timelessness which traverses the boundaries of then and now. Well done, John.
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-05-07 02:32 PM


Lanthanoid!!!
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-07 08:35 PM


Steamer on Vistula or Mississippi?


BAYONETS READY


When they come to set your house on fire,
The one in which you live - Poland,
When they hurl at you thunder, and kindle the pyre
Of iron-clad monsters of war,
And they stand before your gate at night,
And their rifle butts pound on your door,
Rouse yourself from sleep - fight.
Stem the flood.
Bayonets ready!
There is need for blood.


There are accounts of wrongs in our land
Not to be erased by a foreign hand.
But none share spare his blood;
We shall draw it from our hearts and song.
No matter that our prison bread
Not once did have a bitter taste.
For this hand now over Poland raised
A bullet in the head!


O Firemaster of words and hearts,
O poet, the song is not your only stand.
Today the poem is a soldier�s trench,
A shout and a command:


"Bayonets ready!
Bayonets ready!"
And should we die with our swords,
We shall recall what Cambronne said.
And on the Vistula repeat his words.

http://www.raster.art.pl/gallery/broniewski.html

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