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A duet with Karen (Thank You)
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A duet with Karen (Thank You) |
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Savvy Junior Member
since 2007-04-18
Posts 19Washington State, USA |
Traveling Tears By. Karen and Kellie Rain may fall again, but tears are they are forgiven gathering in valleys creased upon the cheek, scriven Hidden in a moment as it falls to the ground and begs the prisms of the light for forgiveness--found. Poisoned by a pale heart, tainted by familiarity and beckoned from the Cave of Death to walk again--agility a breath in a darkened silence, breaking the mold of temptations ceased oils dried in rancid yearn dropped as death--eternity forgotten words, damned if these eyes knew why, rotted spoiled fruit fell from the tree, from the Land of Goshen painted across ancient canvas, on the stone in that dark cave for history and prosperity a tragedy of broken romance from the grave A shadow cast from a unknown traveler A single hand upward and that: "Arise my brother Lazarus!" Weathered time a soverign journey and Gods do not know graves. Many Thanks to Karen for working with me on this. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are a joy.  thank you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 I think there are at least three of us on similar pages tonight! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beauteous blend... atta girls! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sets my teeth on edge evry time I read it words so full and deep |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The perfect blending of words. Excellent dueting, ladies!! |
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Savvy Junior Member
since 2007-04-18
Posts 19Washington State, USA |
Sorry I took so long to respond to everyones thoughtful comments. Life handed me a bag of moldy lemons and I made rather green lemonade. Karen- I really enjoyed writing this with you. I have learned a lot from our late night talks and I am really really thankful for your harsh yet true and real advices and just being a person that can be harsh but not cruel and I really appreciate it. Iliana- Green Lemonade isn't so great but I see that I am not the only one feeling so blah. Sunshine- Thank You so much. I appreciate your comments. The Lady- Very emotional and also appreciated! Gentle Spirit- Hey How are you. I enjoyed writing this with Karen and hope to duet with her again soon! |
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