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Wine and Whiskey
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Wine and Whiskey |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Wine to still the mind, whiskey for the dreams, and a moonlight serenade all that seems to be. Dulcet are the tones in the aftermath of tears and soft the finger touch that calms a woman’s fear but long ago serenity can’t creep up from the rear and sing again so graciously close to a listening ear. Wine to still the mind, whiskey for the dreams, and comes again that serenade I need to hear, to feel, until winter bows defeated to summer’s ecstasy! Helen / 7 May 2007 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ While I don't do whiskey and I don't do wine I could sip a glass of your poetry for the all of time~ I enjoyed your 'moonlight serenade'~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful, so soothing! enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Both are intoxicating.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I feel ya! I feel the melancholy but you always lead me out of it with your end notes. May your summer have its ecstasy! ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for reading and for commenting and, Jo, there's always a summer waiting to come around again - so says that moonlight serenade but I forget, you know.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Helen this.... Wine to still the mind, whiskey for the dreams, and comes again that serenade I need to hear, to feel, until winter bows defeated to summer’s ecstasy! a most certain drip, drip, drip into the intoxication of not fo feel.... this was a profound depiction and left me hanging in the breeze....wonderfully done lady Hugs |
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