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Mother Natures' Lesson
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Mother Natures' Lesson |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan 
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it was a dark winters night moon was shining very bright cold, crisp snow lay all around glistening on the winters ground stars were twinkling in the sky as I heard the owl's cry and the moonlight on the snow shimmered with a special glow then there was a little crunch a little sound, a little munch looking past that evergreen now a spot of brown is seen a delicate leg stepped out big brown eyes began to scout peeking ‘round that group of trees that deer brought me to my knees there he stood so very proud as my watching he allowed he seemed to want me to see what beauty was meant to be for on that one moonlit night Mother nature did invite understanding to come through we are the same, me and you two of God's many creatures now with you as my teacher I will bow a humble man and take my place in God's plan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember the first time I saw a deer up close and it was amazing! awesome write and love that ending! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
paullalady...Very descriptive write. Deer are so elussive and beautiful to watch. Enjoyed very much as I am sure you did when your eyes met his...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This touches my heart in a way you can't know. An absolutely outstanding write. Beautiful and meaningful. Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very pleasant 'write'! I am particularly fond of: "that deer brought me to my knees... ...there he stood so very proud... ...he seemed to want me to see what beauty was meant to be..." AND: "...for on that one moonlit night Mother nature did invite understanding to come through we are the same, me and you..." Applause! |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Beautiful! Every time I see a Deer in my back yard... its like a breath of fresh air... They are truly gentle and precious creatures... Thank you for sharing you experience!! much enjoyed! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful as a wellmade movie. enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"then there was a little crunch a little sound, a little munch looking past that evergreen now a spot of brown is seen a delicate leg stepped out big brown eyes began to scout peeking ‘round that group of trees that deer brought me to my knees"  I love watching animals as they react/interact with humans. What an enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing this special moment. |
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