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Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

0 posted 2007-05-06 09:54 AM

I love you
but I hate you all the same.
I am the puppet
and you are the string,
pulling me up into your heart
then pushing me back out,
and up and down
we go,
not really knowing where we're headed.
You can bring me to dizzy heights
with your apparent love
yet you can bring me down
with your indifference
and the coldness in your eyes.
I can't keep spinning
have to put my feet back down
on the ground
and say to you,
This is enough
This has gone too far
This has to end..

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

1 posted 2007-05-06 10:14 AM

a very powerful poem, and you expressed the anguish very well.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-06 09:24 PM

Jenna, love to read your poem. Your anger could burn my computer and you love can melt the screen. so very strong.

enjoyed.

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