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Take my hand.....
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Take my hand..... |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
 Stop! Don’t do this Take my hand, Let me help you! Allow me to guide you Into the light Please don’t cry, I know it hurts I feel your pain; see it in your eyes I hear it in your silence But it’s ok; I’m here to help you I will walk with you Along the path of healing Please don’t walk away I am not! Don't you see! Iam here for life! Take my hand, Let me in Open your door, expose the demon The pain that drowns you Let it surface! Set it free! It’s the only way towards a new beginning I won’t give up, I never have But its tough love, you’ll get from me Don’t run away to be alone It will haunt your every step At least with me, it will be faced And you will have a caring friend The hardest part Is accepting a helping hand! Take my hand You are not alone! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'write' is most excellent! [one infinitesimally tiny point however... the pink lettering may detract somewhat from its grand emotive power?!] MUCH applause! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
another beautiful piece. Yes, there are hands to help and there are hands need to be held. Friendship.. better than anything because the love is true and one does not have to pay back obligated. enjoyed the poem and the picture as always. [This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-04-2007 11:38 PM).] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent, the empathy is fully heard and felt...martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh...this just had me all teary beautiful piece |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MindBodySoul To read this is to take your hand. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Hey, Jeannete: don't listen to him. (about the shading) I read your stuff in Braille, and it looks just fine to me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An intense emotive write. To be able and willing to offer your hand to help another human is the essence of empathy and the best of humanity. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful gift. |
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thacuteone_09 New Member
since 2007-05-09
Posts 7 |
This really touched me... no lie, I really did like it. I don't know how to explain what I feel... maybe sadness... or joy? Good luck! I can tell you are a great poet. |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
I want to thank everyone for your kind words!! I write with my heart in my hand... I allow myself to flow with the emotion... It gives me great pleasure, when my words touch you and make you think and make you dream... or make you sad... or give you hope... or just makes your day.. These beautiful comments... always brighten up my every day!! THANKS to all of you!!  Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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