navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » i need to get outta here!
Open Poetry #40
Post A Reply Post New Topic i need to get outta here! Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
droppinginsideout
Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54
TENN

0 posted 2007-05-04 01:14 AM


too much is on my mind
i cant seem to see straight.
im not too sure what to think.
seeing as how its all goin way too quick.
this is sort of an outlet.
helps out but only a bit.
it helps just to past the time
and it doesnt seem to lighten the load.

the traffic is backin up.
all i can see are red lights
not just stoppin me
but pointin me in what could be the wrong direction.
i wont know really, until i get to where im goin.
at the end of this line
im waiting and im bored.
i need to stomp out the sound of
anything and everything.
go away on my own,
get out of town and live a new life.
but wait a minute...
there are too many cars in the way.

and is that a speed bump?!?!
are there many more?
i hope not so i can get to where im goin
a little bit quicker.
who knows.

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

© Copyright 2007 Jamison - All Rights Reserved
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
1 posted 2007-05-04 03:20 PM


and is that a speed bump?!?!
are there many more?
i hope not so i can get to where im goin
a little bit quicker.

It seems there's always something to impede us when we really need to be somewhere else. *S* I enjoyed this!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » i need to get outta here!

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary