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Open Poetry #40

Can't Fool Anyone

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2007-05-03 11:52 PM

Thought I was making it through
that my tears were dried up
Thought I was healing
Instead here I sit with you heavely on my mind
Tears so near, heart heavy with denial
Wish I could turn back the time
Turn back the clock once more
Wish I could change my past just once
Wish God would have pity on me
and send my love back

Still can't believe hes gone
No longer in my life, no longer by my side
Whats a girl to do when she is left to die alone
I know I should be smiling
I have enough men here to erase my pain
But my frown won't change
My happiness is gone
Took away the man I would of braught home
He can't feel my pain
He doesnt understand and I wonder does
he even remember my name

I often wonder does he think of me too
Miss me too
In the night does he reach out to touch me
Every morning when I wake
He is first on my mind
No doubt he had my heart
No doubt he had me sprung
Nothing I can do now
Cept carrie on each day at a time
Forever will he come to mind

And to the man that holds my hand next
I will always be looking over my shoulder
For the one who stole my heart
Hoping he will have found his way back
I can't move on if my feet won't go
Can't control what my heart craves the most
My mind can't fool my emotions
So I won't be fooling anyone if he walks
back into the room
And I place my hand back into his

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-05-04 11:11 AM

Yep.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

2 posted 2007-05-04 12:15 PM

Way to go! Loved this...and very relatable.

Dinah

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-05-04 12:19 PM

sad song from a soft heart. May Man hear it.

enjoyed

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-05-04 12:36 PM

beautifully done, and simply adored the ending...
loved this

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