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Certain Whispers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Certain Whispers Certain whispers speak to me Those lost upon a dreamer’s sea Riding foam in echo packs Seeking sandy aged tracks Bubbles bursting in the air Bubbles full of past declare Releasing odors of the past Odors that were meant to last They hold me in a time transcend A place of dream and wily end An echo chamber full of ploy A wedding band of sad and joy Captured in a spirits slot Growing to a phantoms plot My head is full of past conceive Of things that I had once believed Those lashes of a moments craze In ashes of a fires blaze |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
you are back sir. check if Balladeer took your other passwards and your credit numbers, SSN, your old love-letters and some other gooood pictures, or if he did something in your memories. have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ NOW ... that's poetry ... why, I'd recognize you ANYWHERE, even under a different "pen name" ~  Wub ya' ...  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
This is beautiful.. really enjoyed reading it... Thanks for sharing!! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Those lashes of a moments craze In ashes of a fires blaze" You knew I would enjoy this one, didn't you? *grins* Oh yes, Sy...those bubbles keep popping. *hugs*.......jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Certain whispers speak to me" that very first line keeps calling me back Sir Sy it's whispering to me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Balladeer is my friend and I am honored to be his. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you sweetie. Lee gave me a hint as to what to do and it worked, except I still couldn't delete the old one. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MindBodySoul Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana I liked those lines too.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady You are the sweetest. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My head is full of past conceive Of things that I had once believed This is lovely, my friend... these lines really hit home. *S* I'm glad you have your identity back... I know it was frustrating, but I couldn't help but smile... we've been hoping Bal would give us some poetry... and you inadvertently got him to do so... at least for a while! *S* Still... I'm with Marge... I think I'd recognize your rhyme anywhere... know I love it under any name! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful and comforting A wedding band of sad and joy Captured in a spirits slot Growing to a phantoms plot My head is full of past conceive Of things that I had once believed Those lashes of a moments craze In ashes of a fires blaze so so true...magnificant |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, ha! You're back! ~ or is this Balladeer pretending to be you?!?  What a hilarious mix up! I got a kick out of Drauntz's comments! Hardy har har! My dear T-Man, I suppose it wasn't that funny for you! Afterall, The Ball-Man was getting your all your glory! I would think it a safe bet that you will not let little Mikey play on your puter for long, long time!  Love your poem ~ and you! EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You are a dear friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you for the sweet reply and your advice worked, thanks again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel No I am honored to be mike's friend and he can use my computer whenever he is here. Which has nothing to do with how much I love you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
No matter who posts, be it Sey or Deer you are both so precious, so very dear.....I'll think I'll come down to that Moose and buy you both a beer!!!   to two very incredible men. And, I love this poem too!!I've seen the paintings in the air brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sooo good to see it's you...I got lost in the beautiful visions you weave so there is no doubt in my mind who the writer is...Very well done...*Big Hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit What a darling reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you for the big hugs I don't think it will happen again. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yep, I agree with Marge! I would recognize you anywhere. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you SmartChick, loved your reply. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Certain whispers speak to me, but few like yours did in this poem. It is incredible. It's beautiful. And it's you. Thank you. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just wanted to make sure you got my message under the other name...always enjoy the wisdom of your words M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I would know your incredible work anywhere Sy! ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Thank you sweetie you are a dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sy The whispers get louder as I get older, reminding me of who I used to be before..."A wedding baned of sad and joy". I love that! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you dear you are a love. |
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