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Certain Whispers
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Certain Whispers |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Balladeer was over my house the other day and used my computer. He changed my slot some how and I cannot change it back. Need help, thank you. Seymour tabin Certain Whispers Certain whispers speak to me Those lost upon a dreamer’s sea Riding foam in echo packs Seeking sandy aged tracks Bubbles bursting in the air Bubbles full of past declare Releasing odors of the past Odors that were meant to last They hold me in a time transcend A place of dream and wily end An echo chamber full of ploy A wedding band of sad and joy Captured in a spirits slot Growing to a phantoms plot My head is full of past conceive Of things that I had once believed Those lashes of a moments craze In ashes of a fires blaze |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ LOL ... soooo, Balladeer left you his cookie jar for PiP, eh? Now ... when you go to POST ... You'll see this - Your UserName Your Password Just erase HIS Username and Password and type yours in ... that ought to do it up for you~ Then SUBMIT ... might not work on THIS post ... but will for future replies and posts~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
as good as always. Sir. have a wonderful day. what a interesting day! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi Sy Open your internet...go to Tools and click Click on Internet Options Click on Delete Cookies Click on Delete Files Then click on Clear History Good Luck and thanks for posting such a lovely poem |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I tried that and it didn't work. It just says I'm not allowd to do that. Thanks anyway. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Drauntz Thanks you for the read, still trying to clear up the mistake. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL ... I sent the link to Ron .... maybe he can help you get it fixed ... until you can get your hands on that scoundrel, Balladeer~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
To whom am I speaking? ~ and reading? lol I love you BOTH! Linda P.S. I think Balladeer did that on purpose so that he can get the credit for your wonderful sonnets!  . [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-03-2007 04:38 PM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
why do you do such thing to our beloved Sir Tabin? need to find a summer camp for you. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good grief! I'm beside myself!!  On my way to the rescue, sir Sy. I don't want your groupies coming after me!!!!!!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Too late, Bal. *G* I've already booked my ticket... After all, I love both of you! *G* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer Not to worry Mike they love us both. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern How could both not love you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz If you do it will have to have a golf cource. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hope Isabel and Fran will understand and not come after me with a frying pan as I send SMOOOOOOOOOCHES to both of you! *G* |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
What is this that I now see What is this that I now see Double trouble can it be Double trouble can it be Please share with us so new to pip Please share with us so new to pip The reason for this visual trip The reason for this visual trip Is this echos of whispering rhyme Is this echos of whispring rhyme Or Ballads sharing Seymour's line Or Ballads sharing Seymour's line |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
To help our member in distress I'll tell a way to sort the mess Your poetry will still shine through Just swop your names is what to do! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Don't worry, suthern gal. Fran hasn't touched a frying pan in years - Isabel, never! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Is everybody back in their proper skin? Too cute... Sy? No more letting 'Deer take a golf swing from your laptop! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivor, A nice poetic answer, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer All has been resolved and forgiven. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I'm glad you see the humor of it all. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
As always, I enjoy reading your poetry. This is a fantastic write, my friend. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am (rather obviously, I believe) ‘addicted’ to fine imagery!... I especially (absolutely) LOVE: “Certain whispers speak to me Those lost upon a dreamer’s sea Riding foam in echo packs” AND: “My head is full of past conceived Of things that I had once believed” [that reminds me of the lines (from Thoreau?!)...something to the effect: “All of my knowledge only brings me ever closer to my ignorance”...] AND: "Men think they 'know' many things but lo...they have taken wings; all the 'arts and sciences', and a million appliances... The wind that blows is (far, far) more than any man shall ever 'know'(!)" [that is, most assuredly, how I feel these days...particularly with respect to ‘human nature’... motivations and behavior; etc.!] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet I am always impressed with your comments. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
after reading the responses under the other poem named the same I had to search to find out what happened in my absence... hugs to you both and I enjoyed the mix-up but as Marge replied: we would know "our" Sy under any name he posted...it's in his style. ( The same with Balladeer's) M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...I hope it's all straightened out.. I felt as though I was in the twilight zone. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Me too, thank you love.  P.s. It is all straightened out now. |
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