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marcel
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az, usa

0 posted 2007-05-03 04:29 AM




Poetic Savior

Intimately I touch the colors of the rainbow
Like I do the flavors in a bag of skittles;
It is a creative skill I have talented since birth,
Preparing and cleansing hope for my readers
Feeding into my passion and their hunger
With gentle hands that stroke contentment
Into the hearts and thoughts of those chosen few…

Close your eyes and let me dream you sunshine
As you lay atop a million golden stars
Watching the wind take the form of a smile;
Let the sensitive soul of this humble man
Paint a picture of happiness and tears,
With ink that runs of summer green
And pain that runs of auburn winters…

I can empathize with any emotion
Taking a picture with innocence in my eyes
To embrace realness others cannot see---
Now take my hand as you awaken
And I will whisper visions of Heaven
As we walk through my mirror of words together
And come face to face with the sins of the world;
Don’t be afraid of what is not yet understood
I am here, to guide you into paradise…

Marcel

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SPIRIT
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1 posted 2007-05-03 07:09 AM


Soft and soothing...thank you.

Dinah

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2 posted 2007-05-03 07:43 AM


Marcel~

'Let the sensitive soul of this humble man
Paint a picture of happiness and tears,
With ink that runs of summer green'


You have colored the palette of my day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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