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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
on a gentle stream a leaf is carried away; your last kiss lingers CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Parting can be such sweet sorrow... A delicate penning, Sir Knight!  EA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, indeed! Write on, my friend! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
delicately beautiful |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"your last kiss lingers" ahhh CG the beauty of that last kiss lies gently on the mind lovely |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
"sighs" just wonderful! RDB |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
I like the analogy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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