Open Poetry #40 |
The Gray Blade |
MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"The Gray Blade" A strong gray blade so sharp and true a heart that glows with pride Soft lovely lace with lilac hue a Lady by his side. A promise spoke to right the wrong sealed warmly with a kiss bring honor once again ‘er long for such reward as this A blushing face, a touch of lace, of purple on pale thigh, a heaving breast, a warm embrace, a gentle loving sigh. So ride away and win the day for honor and her charms. God speed return and there to earn sweet passion in her arms. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Ken you are always a delight to read and have much passion in the heart well done sir |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
MoonShadow such passion would indeed cause a heaving breast sigh... your purple poem is such stuff as dreams are made on |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Ken. In the midst of winter, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lilac scent lingers in the mind, long after the stroke of it's silken bells has tolled to the senses. Loved this. TD |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Tru... I am pleased that you recognize that the fires burn sizzling hot in a 'seasoned heart'. Kate... Such dreams are what I live for. Nancy... Thank you for the read and response. T.Diamond.. what a lovely whisper of poetic passion and perfume. MoonShadow . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ken... yes I can feel the passion in this from here!! very nice ... RDB |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep, I think you've gone and done won the day, Sir. Enjoyed! |
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