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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-05-02 02:28 PM

            “Starshine”

Starshine lights my dreams at night
    in shadows of the moon;
      fills my soul with such delight
        and plays a lovely tune.

The music fills the skies above
    so twinkling lights do dance;
      while hearts are melted with such love,
        embraced by true romance.

Starshine is the Lady fair
    that sparkles beautifully;
      flashing eyes and silver hair,
        all captivating me.

Goddess of the night and more
    immortal, so it seems;
      sends a glow that I adore
        and thrills me in my dreams.

Though she shines from far away
    I feel her close to me;
      loving Starshine, here to stay
        and shine eternally.

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2007-05-02 02:37 PM

Well done

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-05-02 02:40 PM

Absolutely outstanding.....love is indeed, such a beautiful thing.

I've seen the paintings in the air
brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-05-02 03:40 PM

A shining star of a poem!

Sparkle on, dear poet! Another beauty!

Love & Star Light,

EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-05-02 03:55 PM

Ah, Ken...your muse is amusing you...and us.

Well done!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-05-02 04:27 PM

Exquisite!!

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-02 04:52 PM

beautiful shinning one. I love this very much
a lovely love poem.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-05-03 12:48 PM

gentle Kenneth

dancing lights
and a lady called Starshine

sigh...

do I hear bells softly tinkling?

so lovely

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2007-05-03 08:23 AM

sweet

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

9 posted 2007-05-03 08:27 AM

MoonShadow,

The end rhymes in this poem are well done.

Bobby

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

10 posted 2007-05-03 09:41 AM

This poem sings with a vision filled with the magic of starshine...I was carried away with it...Wonderful writint...*Big Hugs*

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

11 posted 2007-05-03 11:48 AM

What a treasure this poem is.
Beautiful imagery.

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