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Open Poetry #40

Peach Blossom Bay

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-05-02 02:14 PM

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To tell the truth
I didn’t expect short skirts
And come hither looks
On angels

Nor a full service bar
With these fine liquors
In a hunting lodge
By an abundant sea

To eat and drink
As much as you want
Between hours engaged
In such other delights
Would in some faiths
Be damned as sin
Even for one now young again
Found only in the depths of Hell

Well she sighed
With trace of a smile
That sparkled like stars
Through her long brown hair
Out here it’s each to his own

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TC
Junior Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 15
Scotland

1 posted 2007-05-02 03:19 PM

Hi Huan Yi,
I very much enjoyed the humour here.

Regards
Jim

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-02 03:58 PM

my blue screen is burned.

one friend put one's heart in front of one but one steps on and twists it....

However, it is just the lines.

Good poems always from great poet.

enjoyed quite happily of the Bay
and I do like the very relaxed tunes. very manly.

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-02-2007 05:33 PM).]

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