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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-04-30 05:39 PM



Processing each day
as if it were the last
when somewhere inside a note
written on my heart
guides the silence
towards acceptance
keeping me off-beat...
for now.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-04-30 05:58 PM


beautiful as always.

felt the strength.

enjoyed.

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-05-01 03:26 AM


Perfect!

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-05-02 01:03 AM




just for now M...

it speaks to me


aziza
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4 posted 2007-05-02 02:18 AM


Lovely as your words speak volumes.

A

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2007-05-02 09:31 AM


v. fine 'write'!

I particularly loved:

"....a note
written on my heart
guides the silence
towards acceptance"

much applause!

RMW
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6 posted 2007-05-02 02:06 PM


M ... Very nicely done. Bob
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2007-05-02 02:38 PM


Gee, Maureen, I've always thought of you as
offbeat
luv ya and yore writin'

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2007-05-02 05:30 PM


I needed that laugh today~~ thank you "I"


M

jwesley
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9 posted 2007-05-04 10:13 PM


nothing wrong with off-beat my friend....
enjoyed this...

j.

iliana
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10 posted 2007-05-04 10:34 PM


M-Lady, IWIHWT!  
latearrival
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11 posted 2007-05-05 12:13 PM


Read this the other day but was rushed for time. I truly  enjoyed the insite you show.Growth is powerful...martyjo
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2007-05-05 05:34 PM


Not so sure it's growth...I think it is more like exhaustion...
Thank you, all

M

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