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Open Poetry #40
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andrey
Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29
0 posted 2007-04-30 03:03 PM

(This one is for the love of my life, Madeline)

You will have me
And we will have the rain
Falling on your lips
Falling on your skin

Kissing on the sidewalk
While people run away
Heading towards shelter
On this ruined day... for them

Kissing you gently
Raindrops in our hair
I love you more than ever
The most beautiful day
© Copyright 2007 andrey - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-30 03:54 PM

beautiful love poem.

enjoyed
Archea
Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65
United States
2 posted 2007-04-30 04:12 PM

i could smell the rain, almost feel it.  very good imagery here.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-04-30 07:24 PM

Enjoyed...James
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