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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-04-27 08:42 PM



A whisper through the rain
Where cars turned the pavement
Into the cold black that massaged
The spring’s current from the porch’s grey stained
Tiles to the streets signs that sprang with ease
As their white stained signs lye together with the cars
That passed.
It is the camouflage of the sun, as the teardrops that mask
The power lines, shade the acres of grass, and smile
To the angels that pave the cities streets with its touch.
Springs rain, tangles the hands of the sun, maroons around the grim faces of those that walk, as birds chatter,
To the flying echoes of the south bend towards the sun.

© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-27 10:23 PM


very beautiful.your turned hard things into very soft spirit.

enjoyed

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