Open Poetry #40 |
Inner Peace |
ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Inner Peace I don’t know why I’m feeling down, but sadness fills my heart. My breathing’s slow, my mind’s withdrawn, this mood will not depart. I have not got the energy that usually fills my life. I want to sit and rest my soul from all life's daily strife. There’s no particular reason why right now I feel this way, a lethargy just fills my thoughts as my mind drifts away to lands I knew on far off shores where sunshine warmed my day, while I lay on the golden sands just passing time away. I feel that I should meditate to try to clear my mind and listen to my inner self to see what I can find. The reason for this mood I’m in is slowly coming clear, it’s others linking with my soul, I feel that friends are near. Their presence I hold dearly, so a little time I’ll find to sit with them a moment while they nestle in my mind. To share their love of living I’m now joined with them as one, for the peace that they are bringing is much warmer than the sun. This mood I thought was sadness, now a quietness of my soul, bathed in the gentle presence of those who’ve joined the whole, is a time for quiet reflection though I’d thought that I been down, in my mind I’d been mistaken for it's ‘Inner Peace’ I’ve found. Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful~~ M |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful, turly. No many will acknowledge the inside self....how fragile it is. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
every once in a while.. understand. martyjo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivor, I am tucking this exceptional piece of soul-searching, soul-touching writing into my treasure trove of poetry that has significant meaning for me. Lovely poem, lovely spirit, lovely man. Namaste Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This mood I thought was sadness, now a quietness of my soul, bathed in the gentle presence of those who’ve joined the whole, is a time for quiet reflection though I’d thought that I been down, in my mind I’d been mistaken for it's ‘Inner Peace’ I’ve found. you have described it well, it is a sort of yearning, in which I love to bath...not sad, but more so a knowing of unexplainable senses...yanno? well done |
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