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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-04-24 10:12 PM



I pick up each pearls
They shine calmly
Of moonlight swirls

Lying under their smooth shells
Are their pure beautiful souls

I string them together
To make the most precious Jewels
To lace around my heart,
Where my own soul dwells.


* the pearls are the poems posted here by all of you.

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-25-2007 08:01 PM).]

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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2007-04-24 10:17 PM


Oh my goodness...this is simply delightful...the beauty of the pearls and your soul shine through these words...well done...*Big Hugs*
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-04-25 05:09 PM


Enjoyed...James
TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
3 posted 2007-04-25 05:23 PM


Lovely!  What beautiful imagery!

Great work!

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2007-04-25 07:55 PM




moonlight swirls...

lovely piece Drauntz


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