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Open Poetry #40

Relationships

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2007-04-23 03:14 AM

Relationships

The day smiles at your beauty
When you awake and give reason of love,
To the Seasons, flowers and lonely hearts…
What more can a simple man ask for?

But happiness too must occasionally take pause
As you sleep in your own peaceful bliss,
And the simple man ponders and sighs,
While the jealous night secretly watches…

Marcel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2007-04-23 03:38 AM

Good to see you writing again, Marcel. Well done!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-04-25 04:52 PM

Enjoyed...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-04-25 07:13 PM

Marcel~

'The day smiles at your beauty'

'While the jealous night secretly watches…'

From opening to closing ... and all inbetween ... you weave captivating poetic magic~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-25 07:35 PM

beautiful poem with a simply life philosophy...be contented.

much enjoyed.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-04-25 07:45 PM

simple, effective, fine, pure 'Romanticism'....

very, very nice! (much applause!!)

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