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Open Poetry #40

A Ring of Never Was

Rottiestyl
Member

since 2007-04-19

Posts 60
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2007-04-24 07:18 AM

I find my only friend in the ring
At the bottom of my coffee cup.
Days run together like
Blood and sweat.
Nights leave no shadows on the wall
And. . .I am alone.

This is not a dilemma for me to
Sort out or solve.

It is -what it is.

A movie of an unfilled life playing
On the red eye.
No eyes to watch, no reviews to write.
Just
A dried ring of. . .

What if.

By: K. Mulroney
10-04-2006
Copyright

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-24 01:21 PM

no wonder you write with sadness. I checked the weather in Illinois...cloudy. I thought it had been your mood. Tomorrow it will rain so you may have to write with your tears.

enjoyed .

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-24-2007 02:04 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-04-24 06:26 PM

Nice writing...James

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

3 posted 2007-04-25 02:00 PM

Beautiful writing

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