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inside the storm |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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rain pleads at the window longing for our warmth lightning shines jealously watching us wind sings our words mother nature has told them our soul our shared soul arms hold me tendril around a shoot soft bud held in calyx our common root tapping deep a growl from your throat giggle from mine word spoken by two hearts more than love then there is quiet after the rain after you call my name and after |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
How soft & lovely this write is...  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is Yummmmmmmmy, Lady Kate!!! Beautiful poetry. *hugs*.....jo |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
arms hold me tendril around a shoot soft bud held in calyx our common root tapping deep a growl from your throat giggle from mine word spoken by two hearts more than love How beautiful, Lady Kate, it says oh so much... more than poetry... projects a warm and sensual image of two in one.. very loving and spiritual. Quite romantic... a weakness of mine. Thank you for sharing this. MoonShadow |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kate...The weather inside sure sounds like spring. A lovely way to watch a storm creep in.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Love in bloom, such a beautiful sight to behold. Hugs. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah yes, storms can bring such a softness to love...this poem is sensually beautiful...*Big Hugs* |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Tina, thank you so much thank you jo and hugs to you yes gentle MoonShadow I have surely noticed your weakness for romance we are two of a kind thank you Martie I love storms so much and they are so rare here thank you  ah gentle Donna you know me and love thank you thank you James ah... you know the power of storms Startime55 thank you |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
This gave me goosebumps...The way you ended it was amazing. This poem really touched me with its beauty |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much Jenna |
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