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He Whispers
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He Whispers |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan 
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HE WHISPERS he whispers in the dead of night as warm lips trace my cool shoulder fingers trace the shivers of my skin and love binds our souls together he whispers in the dead of night afraid and all alone flashing lights and twisted metal tear my soul in two he whispers in the dead of night while my heart cries out to him and hands reach to feel again this loss too much to bear he whispers in the dead of night to soothe my sorrow and my soul safely held in His hands waiting for me in eternity |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...eternity is waiting for you...James |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Sad & beautiful write. ((hugs)) |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Stunning...my heart went out to you in your loss and then embraced you in your knowledge of eternity...*Big Hugs* |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Both a sad and a beautiful write. I especially like the ending. It shows that God loves all of us. Awesome Poem!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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