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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Words Silent whirling’s won to ground Words like leaves spun round and round Falling like the death of birth To rest upon the face of earth Only echoes flying air Carried whispers of my care Playing phantoms of the swoon Underneath a bright new noon With the passing of the leaves Passes fantasies naïve Circling eternity Those passions of fraternity My soul has sown the chaos theme Into garments of a dream And I have left a breath of air To ever whisper that I care So with each new that stays to breathe Plays the essence of believe |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful...  Hey, you just reminded me, know what I saw last night on the news? No you don't, so I think I won't tell you...hehe just kidding. Sy...I never knew there were crocodiles in Florida....but they reported that after much scientific consentration on habitat, they have come back to thrive. One perfect environment for them is somewhere down there in rivers and streams around a nuclear plant?  Ya Learn somethin every day.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I'm afraid if the nuclear plant goes so do we. I'm about thirty miles away but that's not far enought. The top of the morning to ya.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Words 'Silent whirling’s won to ground' 'Only echoes flying air' How true! and beautiful. Sir I am still think about that "color fusses into white" color can mean beauty also can be chaos in graffiti and many white means, pure, simple, clean, dull, Holy, and many others. trully love to read your poems. have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz I enjoy your comments and thank you for the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I suppose everything passes enjoyed this, especially the last two lines which you always do so well |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweetie I appreciate the comment. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sonneteer! No one can swirl and twirl a word better than you can!  As per usual, I enjoyed this morning's poetic offering! Keep on talking ~ and writing! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you Angel,  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Underneath a bright new noon" awesome Sir Sy |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Seymour, "My soul has sown the chaos theme Into garments of a dream And I have left a breath of air To ever whisper that I care" Your words have sown the seeds of dreams with knowledge bursting at the seams, so all may pluck them from the air natured by all your loving care... Ivor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivordavies Thank you, Enjoyed your addition. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
beautiful words, woven together. I loved the flow and rhythm of this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paullallady Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words are music to my ears...a wonderful time was had by me as I danced to the vision of your words...BRAVO!!!*Big Hugs* |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Loved it Seymour. Lovely as always.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you for the Bravo. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Tina. |
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