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Rottiestyl
Member

since 2007-04-19

Posts 60
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2007-04-20 08:01 AM

A sip of coffee, a deep breath and
Another day has failed.
Such is life. You know your
Missing something when the sunrise
Turns its back on you. Or is it fear?

I would think in all this darkness that the
Moon would still peek around the
Corner now and then.
Guess he’s waiting for me to fall off first.

If you feel the need to stay down under
Please. . . Don’t let my unbearable presence
Slow you down. I would not want to be the
Reason the moon ran away.

Maybe my shadowed mood has you unnerved.
Whatever the case, please send a message to your
Partner . . . The sun must rise.
It’s the way of things. There are no choices for you.

We have a lot in common, my friend.
At least you can hide in your eclipse
Think things over and come back shining.
And the sighs in the moonlight return.
The warmth of sunlight enfolds. All is well. . .
For them.

My life is my darkness, my breath . . . my poison.
My choices have left me with no chances
Some things. . . You can‘t take back.
Another sip of coffee, and I’ll leave you.

I know my presence kills the light.
I see my outlook pale the night.
You can’t compete and I can’t quit.
It’s all a

Cunning game of lies.

By: K. Mulroney
06-28-2006
Copyright

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-04-20 08:16 AM

wheww, extremely profound, loved the matter-of-fact sound, yet, mezmorizing in it's array of emotions...life at it's best

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-04-20 08:28 AM

Some of our deepest and most profound poetry can come when we are in a "shadowed mood". This you have proven to be true. Beautifully penned.

May the moon light your nights and the sun light your days.

Loving Light,

Earth Angel

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-20 10:33 AM

oh! life! You must on nightshift!

enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-04-20 11:02 AM

"I would not want to be the reason the moon ran away"

fascinating line

makes me recall a poem I wrote about the moon blowing the stars out and running away in the darkness

welcome to Passions! I will enjoy reading your work, I know

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