Open Poetry #40 |
hard coded release |
luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
#truth {color:black or white; shifting:none; positioning:absolute;} #emotions, #dreams{visibility:hidden; color:transparent} #remembrance {color:shades of gray; weight:varied} #prayers { position:relative;upon amen:float upward;} <remembrance>There used to be a time when logic did not rule every thought and the curly bracketed if-then-else consequence for every action was easier to ignore; <dream> a time when my fingers were dipped in imagination and together we dreamed our way across the sky</dream><emotion> and as I soared my heart swelled cavorting on currents of dreams, the finding of a soul mate still seemed a likely journey's end</emotion> </remembrance> <truth>but reality is hard coded in truth, and acceptable syntax is all that really matters, premature endings do not allow fault to be assumed and errors corrected </truth> <prayer>Lord thank You for the priceless gift You gave that negated the breach between us and You. This reality with its certainty of harshness and stumbling blocks hiding on every corner is not fashioned for endurance; without You, it would be impossible. This life is not meant to be negotiated blind. Thank you for faith when my eyes don’t see. Amen. </prayer> [This message has been edited by luminosity (04-20-2007 02:18 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A unique and cleverly coded expression of faith. Your luminosity is showing! The ending "Amen. " was perfect! So good to read a poetic offering from you this fine spring day! Loving Light, EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Careful, dear friend, one of your lovely facets is showing... and showing well, indeed. I've missed you! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
thank you both...it has been so long since I heard anything from my muse, that I don't know if she stopped speaking or I stopped listening...or...I am just working toooooo hard, and she's doing all my sleeping *tired smile* will try to come around more, and would do so easier if this connection weren't a turtle on a treadmill |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes, dearheart, a "thank you" for ever being just there does wonders. They blush, they shine... then they write... through you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I tell you that I first read "truth" as "ruth"... and felt each word so much they seemed written for me... would you know how much this touched? *S* Know, my friend... for it did. *S* |
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