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Red Clouds |
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ChaoticHazeLight Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71California, U.S. |
Painting destructive memories… Cascading unrelenting mayhem in minds Forcibly swaying thoughts of persuasion with chaos Are the shadows of mindlessness… Calamitous like earthquakes shattering innocence Emerges from the dust of lies as laughter Then muffled by the tragedy of black hearted rhapsody Swimming in oceans of blood manifested through eyes of growing children Crying in dark nights where no one stops to listen Visions of red skies raining down red lines of kindred Lovers who never cease to manage to lie In each other’s lies… Instead of pure eyes |
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Rottiestyl Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60Illinois, USA |
Very nice and quite powerful. I am surprised there are not more reviews on this. Very descriptive. Nicely done. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
deeply intense, loved the passion in this, the so real perfection of capturing human emotion so well...incredible writing |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
dark. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is something about this that I can't put my finger on...but it touches me |
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