Wonder ...['Rictameter'] dream challenge!

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #40

Wonder ...['Rictameter'] dream challenge!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-04-18 01:00 PM

                    Wonder
               Silent thunder
          Light grips liquid mountain
        Tear perches on purple fountain
      Rainbow scatters into color feathers
           Ocean tailors yonder heather
          Wind weeps through mourning air
               Piercing whisper
                   Wonder

For them

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-04-18 02:12 PM

this is beautiful!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-04-18 06:57 PM

Challenge beautifully met!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-04-18 07:56 PM

A beautiful remembrance.
Thank you very much!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2007-04-18 08:02 PM

Fine write!

Thanks for taking up the 'challenge'!

Applause!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2007-04-18 10:39 PM

"Rainbow scatters into color feathers"
Good to see you do the challenge. This is nice!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-04-19 07:29 AM

Drauntz~

~Thoughtful
Penning the thoughts
Helping us to remember
The events that movingly touch
The very heart and soul of our country
Coming together in our thoughts
Holding others in prayer
Vigil is kept
Thoughtful~

Thank you for joining the challenge so eloquently~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~