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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The snow Drifts slowly To the ground Among these trees In the park by the lake Withered reeds along its shore Shiver in a frigid air Whose perfect silence Seems somehow cold There are no birds— Sparrows robins or cardinals Joyous with crimson wings All it takes Is one vicious snake Or unrepentant idiot To turn Even this little Eden Into a sadness Where no one sings . |
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Rottiestyl Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60Illinois, USA |
Just beautiful! You are fast becoming one of my favorites. Keep them coming! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Totally agree with Rottiestyl. and I died in the previous spring, so I am innocent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect silence yes  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i am really enjoying your poetry as of late has a different tone to it whatever the reason has been... it sure looks good on you |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Helen, I rarely know why I just do my best to get out of the way Thank you John |
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