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Open Poetry #40

This Dream Tonight

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2007-01-15 12:07 PM

When you drift into dreams tonight,
Send your heart my way.
I'll send mine to meet you,
Where love can have it's play.

Send your soul there also,
Though the distance might be far.
Perhaps there our souls will touch,
Somewhere among the stars.

I've been searching for a lifetime,
For someone who understands.
My deepest hidden passions,
The way I think you can.

Could our dreams connect each other,
In a place we've never been.
In a way we've never touched,
But here we might begin.

Could you confide all your passions,
Talk of wants, your needs and cares.
Talk of pain and oh yes laughter,
In this dream far off somewhere.

It would not be an easy task,
To connect a dream that way.
Yet that’s why dreams are special,
Because you think they might someway.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-01-15 08:17 AM

You just seem to grow further each day in your verse.
This one was sparkling.
Enjoyed very much.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-01-15 11:36 AM

Amazing...wonderful feelings in this one Bill.
Very uplifting and hopeful.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

3 posted 2007-01-15 02:37 PM

Diamond, Enchantress..your words of kindness helps a young poet to keep on writing.

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