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Losing touch
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Losing touch |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Memories of us slip by in my head of a night when all is still and I'm left with just my thoughts. Those days when we would talk for hours and still find something to say, Those times when we shared our fears and became so immersed in each others pain that we almost became one. Those weeks when we would be apart and miss each other so much that it bought an ache to the heart. So natural and so easy the way our hearts and minds just linked as if they'd never been apart. But times change and we're feeling the pressure as distance tears us down and breaks us so we're both left clinging to our memories and searching for those moments of days gone by. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nicely written with all the angst of a lost love. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate to those thoughts of days when we talked for hours Hope |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you read my heart, mind, and soul with this...I know you're not the person I lost...but damn you sure did write it out better than I ever could!! "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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