Peek Pink Amid White Ruffle

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Open Poetry #40

Peek Pink Amid White Ruffle

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-01-14 11:06 PM

Peek Pink Amid White Ruffle

Bend down, soft ruffle
Warm with enthusiasm
His eyes dance bouquet

Blush, to meet his gaze
Porcelain peeks to see
Buds in snow beg spring

His fingers soft plead
Be seen to watering mouths
Shy buds fold down, not yet

Copyright Kkh 1/14/07

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

1 posted 2007-01-14 11:26 PM

Bend down, soft ruffle
Warm with enthusiasm
His eyes dance bouquet

Siyo ThisDiamond this gives me the picture of my granddaughter in her first fancy dress for dance at school,she was so beautiful to see in her favorite color pink!

granny!

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

2 posted 2007-01-15 11:58 AM

All the poems I have read from you are sodelicate. Must be of 1 that has such a tender heart!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2007-01-15 12:55 PM

1derful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2007-01-15 01:50 PM

Soft and delicate write - much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2007-01-15 03:08 PM

"His fingers soft plead
Be seen to watering mouths
Shy buds fold down, not yet"

oh TD

especially delicious

Generationaway
New Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 7
UK

6 posted 2007-01-15 03:17 PM

Always difficult to write a Tercet but you have handled it beautifully, a treasure of a poem for lovers.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-01-15 06:57 PM

Masterpiece...

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-01-15 07:25 PM

A poetic delight! ~ in both technical form and in imagery!

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