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Momentary Pleasures |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We start with emptiness. And gathering more against our fingers, We trace our world solid. A caress of momentary pleasures. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fulfilling creativity on the blank canvas calling for our fantasy. The lawn is ready and so is the sky spread your flowers I'll add the butterflies. Now let's step in and animate the scene! * * * Wonderful, momentary pleasures, dear Eric! Loving you, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric, I couldn't possibly write a reply as wonderful as the one penned by our dear Margherita!  Love your work, Poet Man!  Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wonderful write as usual, Eric. "A caress of momentary pleasures." Some may wish for an embrace but, no, it is only a caress as you so rightly say. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
"A caress of momentary pleasure" How powerful this statement is...Life itself is so fleeting...there is so much to learn and not all lessons are pleasurable...mmm I just love the way this poem made me think...so few words but they sent me off on such deep thoughts...Great job...*Big Hugs* |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know how you do it but you do it very well. |
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