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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Trapper Pick up my temper and Gently dust off the pain, will you? So my friend Anger May wear it again. Trapper Collect all my tears and Carefully rinse the salt, will you? So my friend Sorrow Will have a clean container Trapper Trash out my heart of cold and the hard Then my friend Love Will come to feed my dove Trapper Peel off my civility The contaminated utility Then my friend Passion Oh, passion, my dear friend Will wrap me warmly In graceful heavenly fashion [This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-16-2007 01:06 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very original composition, dear Drauntz. Love, Margherita  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Trapper Peel off my civility The contaminated utility Then my friend Passion Oh, passion, my dear friend Will wrap me warmly In graceful heavenly fashion" delightful work Drauntz |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is an elegance to the gentleness of the lines which makes it a very soothing read....very nicely done. |
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