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A Touch |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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I miss you completely, with every bone in my body, every hair on my head. If I could just touch you once, leaving words unsaid. It's just another day I sleep away rather than staring out wanting the rain to come to give perspective on what life's about. I need a change of scenery, a lighter greener view, I need rain in the mornings, and at night a touch from you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...I'm missing someone right now...missing is a part of wanting and needing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such an intense write, dear Dixie. May the rain clarify everything. At least it will create the atmosphere that allows you to go inside and find the answers. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This poem I can feel deeply... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Good poem. Touching. A |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I loved this a lot. It was so honest and touching. Came straight from the heart. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this is wonderful... "a lighter greener view, I need rain in the mornings, and at night a touch from you." |
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Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
Wow girl...you are inspiring...I realy enjoyed that...Reading and learning... |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Missing someone is beautiful yet so sad at times. I hope the rain you seek, will fall soon and will help you clear your thoughts... search within and find your sactuary... Just beautiful.. thanks for sharing!! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I hear you Dixie girl .... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love and longing beautifully expressed Hope |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Oh, yes. Of all the things...I miss touch the most.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
quite romantic. very good. enjoyed. wish you well, dear passing |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Everyone needs the feel of a soft touch. Maybe we should all vow to hug a stranger when we see the need. You Are Loved. martyjo |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Beautiful sis. A perfect echo to what's been going on in my head. "The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
feel your pain, great poem |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Darlin' Dixie, you certainly know how to reach out and grab a reader in the solar plexus and bring them into your world. Now where is that clarifying rain? I think that I could do with some of that right now, myself! Sending you some cleansing spring rain, Linda  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Perfection simply romantic |
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