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My peacock
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My peacock |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Peacock, oh, peacock How magnificent you are Passing me with dazzling shine Like a merrily sauntering star Will you lent me a feather In such a fine weather? Not for memorizing you, dear But for beautifying my tether To you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cute write, dear Dauntz. Love, Margherita  |
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outlawthunder Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 67 |
watching, feeling, reaching out, touching, those things outside one's self and what is in it for you, but to appreciate and know, to recognize, to somehow say "thank you" to those simple things that make life worth the living. connections...always the connections OUTLAWTHUNDER |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One of our poets has a small cadre of peacocks....who adopted her and her home. I must share this poem with her, and if we are very lucky, she might share some of her photos with you! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey there....I'm that person that Sunshine was talking about...it's a long story but my husband and I started the colony that I think will grow bigger this spring. They have special meaning to us...but even without that, they are so beautiful, aren't they? I'd be happy to share them with you. and, of course I loved the poem! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Martie, thank you so much. let me say, if there is Peacock Garden close to you? I will be very glad if this is true. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem is as pretty as a peacock! They do make a grand display with those magnificent tail feathers!   EA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This delightful poem sings beautifully...*Big Hugs* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the way the words are spread out like tail feathers in the glorious if very structured poem. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what a delightful poem, full of beauty. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz I visited a peacock farm once and you must beware of where you walk. LOL |
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