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Eternal Rhyme |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Eternal Rhyme I love to write sempiternal rhyme To ride the winds fraternal time To oil the waters raging smooth And turn some moments into sooth To stay the passions of recall To echo like a songbirds fall A touch of honey on the tongue The sound of bells in evenings rung A rhyming rhyme of pantomime To ply and fly with fleeting time To stay the air in winsome fair To be the shell of echoes wear It must be pleasing smooth of ring And soft and tender in its sing Butter on a hot breads bed A women’s shape to turn a head A feast that salves the soul in care A thing that sweets a breath of air |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GoodMorningSirSeymour~ Thank you for the early morning share of beauteous thought~ I simply *sigh* for Sy~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Good morning dear, thank you and have a good one.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It must be, certainly, for you do it so well... and you certainly turned this head. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how I love to read your words early in the morn Sy! Here is yet another example of excellent writing. &  , Nancy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine What a darling reply, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy. You are a love, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I love to write sempiternal rhyme To ride the winds fraternal time To oil the waters raging smooth And turn some moments into sooth embracing metaphor becomes you like a wool sweater, all warm and cozy....not to mention your ambiance as a teacher. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A little bit of flattery in my morning coffee is a delight. Top of the morning to you sweetie. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
How beautiful this one is. I love this "To oil the waters raging smooth". so good. "to oil"? M... this is a poem of a quite heart. You must have slowed down your Merri-go-around. enjoyed happily as always. have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Thank you so much, enjoyed your comment. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You create an atmosphere that becomes tangible and visible for the reader. A moment in time, precious gift to FEEL. Beautiful Poet Seymour Tabin, your words are always so meaningful and harmonious. A joy to read. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita, Your comment is pure poetry to me, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
nothing sweeter than "A touch of honey on the tongue" and reading you at night |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I am very glad you love to write this way....your words always brighten the day and pleasure the heart and soul....*Big Hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady May your always sleep with the good word. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Peace be with you and thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your rhymes are always a feast... I didn't realize how hungry I was for them. *S* Beautiful work, my friend! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you dear. |
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