Open Poetry #40 |
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Nobody |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
For humorous only The Song Of Nobody When Nobody was lying rest, And rest close to a pond Where nature sings its daily songs And Paparazzi were easily around They sealed his spell with a golden crown and With a new name upon Then in the dreary afternoon Under a pale strolling moon Somebody saw Nobody Quietly sitting on his throne Somebody screamed “Who waked up Nobody?!!!” Nobody gave a ring of the bell Nobody came to break the spell. Bravos!!! Bravos!!! [This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-09-2007 10:29 PM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
The Song Of Nobody When Nobody1 was lying rest, And rest close to a pond Where nature sang its daily songs And Paparazzi were easily around They sealed his spell with a golden crown and With a new name upon Then in the dreary afternoon Under a pale strolling moon Everybody1 saw Nobody1 Quietly sitting on his throne Everybody2 screamed “Who waked up Nobody1?!!!” Nobody2 gave a ring of the bell that Nobody3 came to break the spell. since then Everybody is Nobody and nobody is unique me. Bravos!!! Bravos!!! [This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-10-2007 11:40 PM).] |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Hee Hee! Thanks for making me laugh! It helped break the spell of a dreary day! ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Who cares about nobody and why shouldn't everybody sleep in his stead? This is an interesting play on words I like the revision as much as the original. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Drauntz, do you remember the story of Homer's Odysseys? When he encountered Cyclops, Odysseys claimed his name to be "Nobody". I am reminded of that passage in reading this body of work. Enjoyed! |
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