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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Undone I have had what I wanted in life, not sure if I can capture again the "awe" of the all that was there everyday, as I speak to myself words of then. I have known what it was to be loved, though it left me some time awhile back. It's the hard of the soft and the soft of the hard that keeps gnawing to lead me off track. So I venture forth knowing that there is a danger in loving anew, creating a world that can capture again what was once, but can be... through and through. There are words that can harbor my feel or can bandit and steal me away as they meet between lines, sometimes hidden in rhymes leaving finished unfinished this day. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"It's the hard of the soft and the soft of the hard that keeps gnawing to lead me off track." oh! love this sentence. enjoyed. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A fine musing poem M, i like the way it flows and reads so very well..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, you sure have a way with words. Beautiful! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Maureen, Don’t hurt yourself . . . Given a chance at such magnificence there are plenty who will stand in line John . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree with John here |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"So I venture forth knowing that there is a danger in loving anew," ~ By being brave of heart and venturing forth, you are opening yourself up to new life experiences! All of which are opportunities for growing ~ and loving!  May love be with your always! I always enjoy the fruits of your poetic talent ~ and your inate wisdom. Have a love-ly life! Linda  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Insightful, dear Maureen. And I agree with venturing into the future by giving a new love the chance to BE. Life is NOW! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A fine 'write' of truth, realism, insight, depth, and emotion! much applause! |
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