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Each Drop of Blood
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Each Drop of Blood |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
EACH DROP OF BLOOD I can see light filling a world where hate reigned as king Such time it takes YOUR message is clear to spread so far and wide in a world left dark with fear YOUR sacrifice men are aware with the pain YOU have endured YOU gave YOUR life for each of us so that paradise we could now earn Each drop of blood that was spilt has paid the price for our sins not asking much of us but to live loving HIM Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer 2002 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a beautiful presentation for this love spilling text! Yes, if we only could follow Him and learn to LOVE as He has taught us. Thank you for this. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KarenKarenKaren~ You would have to KNOW that I just adore the all of this ... the message so gently shaped into the tear that fell for all of us~ Thank you for the beauty of this share~ I applaud you, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
simply marvelous! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely presentation and words for the world to hear...well done, thank you |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
Usually shaped poems sound off but this ran very smoothly.Very good My mind is like lightning |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen this is gorgeous! And your words....so true. Thank you for this keeper. For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Well done. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful!! Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A compelling and visually stirring display of your own love for Him.  Love & Jesus Light, Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
absolutely beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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outlawthunder Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 67 |
the spirit of your piece is strong the value of your words immeasurable the strength of your message profound but what i found the most telling about the integrity and work-ethic of your poetry is you cared enough to make the tear fit perfectly. that took some doin just on the mechanics of it. a real artist has that kind of drive to give it the full picture and effort. you did it. OUTLAWTHUNDER |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Karen , Beautifully expressed and so true Hope |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
the shape that you chose is just an added emphasis to your amazing words. |
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