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Ebony Night
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Ebony Night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Ebony Night Ebony night stunts my mood It blunts my mind of crude and rude It slides me down the pit of ID And will not let me lift my lid I feel the shadows dance around Touch my skin in whispered sound Electrifies the sweat of sere And there the angst appear in fear I listen for each sound a key To turn a latch and set me free But ebony is sheer inane And plays upon my minds insane There is no way to shunt the dark No firefly will light a spark And I am left a pit of dwell That smells to me the fringe of hell To force me to a knave and slave If not a mornings kiss did save |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Your 'Ebony Night' makes my morning bright~ Aha, the morning kiss is to read your morn of bliss~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A delightful reply that deserves a |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Seymour gotta love those kisses..Loved the poem. As always your poems goes great with my coffee. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
trutodaraiders Enjoy you coffee and may my poems continue to bring joy thank you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's hard for me to imagine you in darkness, as you are such a source of light for me.  and if there is no firefly about, surely there must, at least, be a glow worm somewhere about?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear Sy! In the midst of winter, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I listen for each sound a key To turn a latch and set me free Sir Sy... I have a key, pick me, pick me!!  Loved this! RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, It's not so much the ebony night as the orbit of my mind in flight. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Thank you sweety. RDB You would orbit the ebony night with me. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Seymour, Hey it's just gone midnight here in the UK and this is the last poem I'm reading before I go to bed! Ivor The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivordavies Well just wait for the mornings kiss. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
To force me to a knave and slave If not a mornings kiss did save Sigi Seymore Tabin it amazes me my friend the depth of tenderness,to chase away the fears of night madness,the angry dreams,and night walkers,a single kiss from the one who matters!
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"the orbit of my mind in flight." now that IS a predicament that we both share... M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wredgranny Exactly, you read very well, thank you. Maureen, Yes we all share but not permanent. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writ my friend Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh that sweet morning kiss Sir Sy saves many of us well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I know, I know. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
As I look out the window into the darkness, I sense you are there. I love your poetry. A |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW! Hey Sy missing this place, thought I'd pop in and take a glance and as always you are one of those I'm drawn to every time. You never disappoint my friend ~hugs~  Tracie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank goodness for the kiss of morning! I'm wishing you lots of fireflys, Sy...and lots of those morning kisses. ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza It is a love I cherish. Thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, You are a good friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you and may the fireflies visit you too. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well i´t's late afternoon for me, so I must have patient till tomorrow, will have my morning kiss either As always a treat to read Sey  ((((hugs))) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma It's on its way. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hope your feeling better, i finally got word to write. been a while. missed you sweet sy My spirit will rise |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
*sigh* a kiss does it for me, too. Enjoyed! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janette Thank you for the sigh. |
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