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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Cutting Edge Creativity Words honed like a knife Written to cut and take a slice Of those standing in my path All in the name of Art All in the name of Poetry Friendships dismantled once strong Dedicated now to show wrongs Righteous beliefs over-riding It’s allowed in Art It’s allowed in Poetry Vows broken to stand in ever love But when push came to fateful shove It doesn’t mean as much As creating Art As creating Poetry Night quiet facing simple fact Keep emotional honesty intact Responsible and accountable Even in Art Even in Poetry Words slashed to the bones Righteous, still one stands alone Heart rooms echo With only Art With only Poetry ... aziza |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wow !!! u rock an roll with the poetry skills , cool ~AuJus In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Alison...your words are amazing.. such talent you have gorgeous girl!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you both Introspection is good for the soul, right? A |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Words honed like a knife Written to cut and take a slice Of those standing in my path" I heard your "heart rooms echo" and it sounded tempting enough for me to take another "slice" ... so I read you twice. (great word usage here ... knife, cut, slice ... very clever) always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this made me sad, as it comes to me very personal....and I suppose I'm turning it around a bit, but I believe everyone's become so easily insulted that the only way to cope it to put it in poetry or art? Hugs to you, so so nice to see you back |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
feelings expressed in poetry...and the truth sometimes is too much to read yes, this aches  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I like this one. If it wasn't for poetry I don't know what I would do sometimes. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very thought provoking write...well done...excellent... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Introspection is good for the soul, right?" angst is hard and only art and poetry last forever ah my dear aziza love is better for the soul but in its absence introspection is necessary I really love this poem |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Your emotions are read easily in your art, and your poetry, yet you leave scores of mystery. Rachael |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome~ My spirit will rise |
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