Open Poetry #40 |
Talks With Doves |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Talks With Doves Snow flurries swirled in eddies around the still hot body of the rabbit like tiny white messengers calling it’s soul back to heaven – or wherever the soul of a rabbit plays; assuming, that is, life in any form is sacred, lives on, talks with doves, angels, or whatever winged purveyor of God’s spirit guides it once it has departed the physical realm. Trees – live. So does the rest of earths flora. Do they also – talk with doves . . . ©wesley james beard, jr. april 2007 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I believe they do this just touched me deeply |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
I hope they do ... Beautiful write! Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rabbits go to heaven or I'm not going!! (*cough* I love rabbits) |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful! it makes me grow wings. |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
Of course they do My mind is like lightning |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. http://lennon.csufresno.edu/~kds31/dic1.html . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Jim, your words were so touchingly beautiful! You truly do have a divinely poetic soul! The bunny is in heaven surrounded by doves that have already flown their. The angels are smiling and gathering around his gentle little spirit. Heaven wouldn't be as heavenly if our little furry friends weren't there! Enjoyed your lovely write, my friend! Hugs with love, Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sure! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, yes they do! I am deeply touched by your sensitive poem. Just today me and my husband found a dead cat (a beautiful one too) resting in the grass besides the street, just where we parked. It was so SAD to look at this beautiful cat and my husband, also touched, said that he would have preferred not to see it. But I said, that we were meant to see it and to accompany its soul to heaven with a prayer. I asked my beloved cat Mizar who is also in heaven, to welcome the cat's soul and to make it play in paradise and make it feel HOME. Yes, you see, I am positive that all living beings (all that exists actually) have a soul that exists eternally. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..I believe they do. It's so good to be reading you again Jimmy. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh this is beyond words |
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outlawthunder Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 67 |
oh how the violent ones of this earth wave their arms and scream such dribble always in someone else's name. a dove passes on, a rabbit passes on, and returns singing sharing loving in nature's unique ways if only man had half a clue what we could become. it's a circle afer all. the violent ones are a one-shot moment in history. what you write about drives, indeed, insures the universe thrives on something far more powerful and eternal than any thug ever will be. OUTLAWTHUNDER |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I believe that all creation lives on....This poem touches the soul...*Big Hugs* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
surely they do m'friend...surely they do. Lovely words Jimmie. |
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