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Open Poetry #40
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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-04-06 12:40 PM


I stood at the top of the mountain
I called out his name
I listened to the echo
Till echo rippled away.

He was not there
I tore a piece of cloud
To wipe my tears.
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Huan Yi
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1 posted 2007-04-06 01:26 PM



good


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2 posted 2007-04-06 02:12 PM

Enjoyed your visions. Mountain tops inspire!

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3 posted 2007-04-06 03:18 PM

oh, feelin this....well done...
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4 posted 2007-04-06 03:38 PM

Excellent! I loved this one. martyjo
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